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Tuesday, August 16, 2011

My Love, My Soul

My Love, sweet heart, my life, how do I address you?
I would be wrong if I say you are my heart,
for one day it will stop beating!
I would be wrong if I say you are my blood,
for it flows not to my nails!
I would be wrong if I say you are my breath,
for I do exhale leaving it out!
I would be wrong if I say you are my life,
for its not always sweet as you!
I would say you are my soul not parted in death,
for am yours and you mine eternally!
I had written this poem in 2006 and it got published in a book (in US) too.. :-). I have that book with me.

3 comments:

  1. I may sound like a broken tape..but vera vazhi ellai..Wow!! Super poem yet again.. these lines were really super and out of the world!! :-)

    //I would be wrong if I say you are my breath,for I do exhale leaving it out! I would be wrong if I say you are my life,for its not always sweet as you!//

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  2. Hey Grace, the poem got published in a book? Wow!! Congrats.. It is a news to me. You did not tell me that. Congratulations once again... Very nicely written poem. Enjoyed a lot --> Dhiyana.

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  3. Thanks Srini..:-)
    Thanks Dhiyana..yes, in PA.. I didn't remember to tell you..Yesterday I was digging thru my sent mail folder, as I have some of my words and Hani's early year memories there as I used to share with my family....and found this..Thanks lots Dhiyana :-)

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