The clouds had roared and poured
Until the day dawned;
The woods look calm and content
Diffusing pine fragrance so pleasant;
Tiny a snail gliding very leisurely
Way behind a blackworm so wiggly;
Blue Jays and sparrows singing merrily
Nature delights when observed closely!
As usual good one Grace. There is a nice feel in the poem :-).
ReplyDelete"Diffusing pine fragrance so pleasant" - Beautiful line :-)
Great my dear, groom the poet in you
ReplyDeleteSimply superb! I could feel it....
ReplyDeleteThanks Vino, Meena and Srini :-)
ReplyDeleteMy son's comment: "You should put more details..like did you see any fallen trees? and any other snails?".
ReplyDeletehmmmmmmm :-)