Oh bright star closest to me
Why are you so angry on me?
You are being very harsh these days
My heart is wilting, I feel bruised and shattered;
I turn to my reserves but your displeasure reflects in them
For the lakes and rivers too are heating up in your blaze;
In your wrath you have taken away the chill from them
In your blaze do not take them away from me!
My life spins around you for ages and ages
In your wrath don't make me barren
For then, no life will look upon you,
Give you a green smile or sing at your arrival!
Why are you so angry on me?
You are being very harsh these days
My heart is wilting, I feel bruised and shattered;
I turn to my reserves but your displeasure reflects in them
For the lakes and rivers too are heating up in your blaze;
In your wrath you have taken away the chill from them
In your blaze do not take them away from me!
My life spins around you for ages and ages
In your wrath don't make me barren
For then, no life will look upon you,
Give you a green smile or sing at your arrival!
Wonderful one Grace!!. Good that I managed to escape the heat :-) and if Sun God hears this poem, for sure he will yield :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Srini, yes you did escape the baking heat here.
ReplyDeletecreative and nice thought :)
ReplyDeleteAnd for me, this actually is one of your best...
Thanks Nachu! Thank you very much! :-)
ReplyDeleteGreat Grace.. Very creative.. Keep writing.. sorry keep creating!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Shaby! :-) Sure, your's and all my friends' words encourage me to try more.
ReplyDeleteVery very nice one Grace :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Sylace! :-)
ReplyDeleteWow Grace!! Great one.. You are so creative.. Please keep creating more and more like this..
ReplyDeleteThanks Dhiyan! Thanks for the motivating words :-)
ReplyDeleteSuper anni
ReplyDeleteThanks Pradeep
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